Sunday, August 26, 2012

The Bellwether, a contemporary, apocalyptic novel

 
The Bellwether (the Mother of all Disasters)
(environmental and economic meltdown)
 
 
This man's name is Daniel Friskop, a modern day mountain man. He has a cabin in the southern Minnesota woods that's due back taxes but he's not often there. Mainly he travels alone with his four animal companions. Horsefire, his mount, Applechaser, the smaller horse, Julian, a wolf, and Satire, a lynx which rides on the back of Horsefire.
He's one of twelve main secondary characters, which includes a farmer, a bar bouncer, a homeless man, a lady gambler, a lady factory worker, and seven Native Americans. Plus two seven-year-old girls, a nine-year-old boy, six villains, and, finally, an osprey.
As one Amazon reviewer said: "...a long book but not a slow read..." Her review (one of three) will appear at the end of this post.
 
Think of the 1800s, the wagontrains, and the people who crossed the prairie looking for a better life. Now fast-forward to the new millennium and the worldwide economy totally crashing, causing unbelievable chaos and violence. Through Native American prophecy, Aaron Hodges (the bellwether) sees it coming and envisions building a hidden colony to ride out the likely decades-long crisis.
 
Caroline Jentner is the love of Aaron’s life. She has a partly-crippled, seven-year-old daughter, Jennie.  Little Jennie doesn’t have a big part, and doesn’t appear until  chapter 12, but when she does appear she will capture your heart. You will come to love her, and she helps Aaron and her mom finally get together near the end of story. Caroline often has the viewpoint, and sees the world quite differently from Aaron.
When the crash came nobody could point a finger and blame a specific thing. The United States and the world were locked in drought, stagnant economy, and rampant pollution. Too many people were wasting too much, demanding too much standard of living, and too much money created too much free time and entertainment, for, as one height was reached boredom prevailed, and more and greater thrills were demanded.
            More wood, more metal, more food and drink, and more oil.
            The oil flow stopped.
            Then the flow of supplies stopped. The civilized world found itself trapped inside a steel, concrete, and plastic wasteland with no utilities, no food, no water.
            And no gasoline.
Set in the near future, novel runs for two years. The main theme is a modern-day wagontrain with over sixty people driving sixteen covered wagons pulled by four-horse teams for 30 days across 300 miles from southern Minnesota farming country to northern Minnesota wilderness. Background themes include the economy, environment, and a shadowy “master race” organization out to eliminate the Native American. This novel is character-driven, just normal people loving and finding love, surviving, and reacting to circumstances as best they can. You will like the characters, you will care what happens to them, and at the end you will cheer.
 
Excerpt three scenes from C11 The Hallowed Courage Creek Affair Part 1

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Aaron’s horse began sidestepping as the pickup roared toward them. All the horses did. They snorted and threw their heads up, one began rearing. The horses couldn’t know that the speeding pickup would, likely, stop, eventually.
            “Hold onto your horses, boys,” Aaron said uncertainly, “I can’t believe he’ll run us down…!”
            “I hope Helm can’t believe it!” Kelly commented, “Whoa, boy!”
            The profane voice became plain, “Those people want to fight,” Luther Helm was yelling, beating on the cab, “We’re sure as hell going to give it to’em!”
            Violence.
            “Head right at’em!”
            The eyes of the younger man who looked like Helm were wide open, and almost appeared frightened. All four horses were straining to move, to run.
            “Slam on the brakes!” Helm screamed.
            The driver—Aaron recognized Mallory Spicer—eyes wide and wild-looking, hit the brakes. On the dewy grass the pickup went into a screeching skid and hit two of the horses. It happened unbelievably fast. Twenty-five feet past the horses the pickup finally stopped, was as if Luther Helm had actually planned the uncontrollable skid. Two horses down, Kelly and Simon both thrown. Aaron  jumped off and held onto his frantic horse.
            Kelly was up quickly, “Good Christ, Helm! What the hell you tryin’ to do?”
            The hunched man jerked around, lower lip sticking out prominently, brown juice dribbling, catching in stubby gray chin whiskers. He spat in the direction of Aaron, ”I know you, Bolander!” he yelled, sounding something like a broken foghorn, “And I don’t mind seein’ you farmers so much, but who is that hippie-agitatin’ longhair?”
            Kelly, back in control of his horse and himself, “That man’s Aaron Hodges, and he’s got more right here than you!”
            “What?” Helm screamed so loudly the foghorn-sounding voice cracked.
            “That’s right, Helm.” Aaron led his horse to within ten feet of the silver-blue-white pickup, “I was born here and plan to live here.” He saw two patrol cars approaching, caution lights flashing, “I’ve never heard of you settin’ foot in this valley until now, to destroy it.” The sheriff and two deputies were approaching, “Now I and all the people you see.” He pointed toward the camp, speaking loud enough for the nearing sheriff to hear, “…are here to inform you that we have an injunction coming against your dam. We expect you to leave your machinery sitting until we hear from the court!” He turned to the law officers, “Sheriff, I believe you’re required to see our legitimate request is honored.”
            The sheriff glanced from one faction to another and didn’t appear certain of anything, “Mister Helm,” he said in a shaky voice, “Maybe you ought to wait and see if these people really do—”
            Helm, with several brown stains on his unshaven face, spat in the general direction of the sheriff, “You are crazy, hippie!” he yelled, as if the sheriff didn’t even exist, “My machinery ain’t waitin’ for no damn longhair! We’ll drive right over you!”
            “There’s women and children out here, Helm,” Aaron returned, “I can’t believe you’ll do that.”
            An evil glint shown in the hunched man’s eyes as he growled, “Don’t bet your life on it, Mister.”
            Aaron felt a bit queasy staring back, but here was a chance to show the desecrators that common people no longer would sit back and let power-hungry, money-mad men run over them, or was it more personal than that. Suddenly he wasn’t sure.
            A smirk spread over Helm’s face, the other young one’s face too, and Mallory Spicer was grinning.
They think they’re winning. Aaron climbed back onto his white-faced bay mount, and reached for his hat. He saw Kelly’s face, and Matthew’s, and Simon’s. Their expressions said they would do what he thought best. He saw the waiting people, the farmers, the businessmen, the senior citizens, the kids, the defenders of Hallowed Courage Creek Valley. They too would do what he thought best.
This is best. He was doing right—violence. The breeze felt cool as he removed his hat with his right hand and raised it far above his head, and waved it wildly.
 
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A cheer arose from the waiting people. Josephine led the way with her four white horses hitched to a hayrack loaded with children from seven to twelve years old. Joseph and the Bolander wives followed with four more teams pulling wooden hayracks loaded with people. Then came pickups, trucks, large and small tractors pulling plows, drills, field cultivators, self-propelled grain combines and swathers, more than forty rigs loaded with people who meant to remain living and earning their living in the valley.
            Aaron watched as each vehicle reached a point and stopped. Then the people jumped off and spread themselves, filling all gaps. In five minutes the site of the so-called flood-control-recreational-municipal-water-supply-wildlife-refuge Hallowed Courage Creek Dam-site was a solid wall of people and machinery, blocking access to Luther Helm and his bulldozers.
            Then a second line, the twenty mounted riflemen led by Taylor Magellan formed about a hundred feet in front of the line of protesters and farm machinery.
            Aaron smiled uncomfortably, and from the corner of his eye he saw the sheriff speak to one of the deputies who went running. He put his hat back on and faced Helm.
            The hunched man was smiling, a sadistic, brutal smile, and the younger man who looked like Helm appeared to be actually gloating. Helm leaned back, then leaned forward and spat a huge glob of tobacco, landing it almost to Aaron’s horse’s feet, causing the animal to step back. Helm took a fresh chew, grinned mercilessly, then gave his own wave to his own waiting men.
            “Luther, I’m not sure you’re within your legal rights now,” the sheriff spoke up, “People could get hurt here today. I—”
            The sheriff’s voice was drowned out by dozens of diesel engines starting and revving, roaring, but completely audible came Luther Helm’s voice, “Same damn thing all over the country!” Helm screamed, “Mark my words, Anson!” he yelled at the younger man beside him,, “Any employee stops before I say—he’s fired! High voltage lines! Nuclear power, goddamn hippie agitators!”
            Violence.
            “Get your people out of the way, Bolander!” Helm shrieked, then pounded on the cab’s roof, “Spicer, get us the hell out of here!”
            Spicer jammed into gear, floored the accelerator, dug in with all four wheels, throwing dirt on the sheriff, scaring the horses again.
            “My god, Aaron!” Kelly cried, “Do you think he means it?”
            “Got a feeling he does, Kelly. Let’s get back to the other riders.”
            Helm yelled after them, “Yeahhh! Get the hell out of here, hippie! Yeahhh!”
            Aaron doubted many people heard him over the revving engines, but Aaron did. His ears humming he tried to think as they rode the short distance to the other riders. Some of the men were mounted on the slower workhorses, and what good were they? Had he thought they could mount a cavalry charge? Against bulldozers? Maybe time to admit a mistake. Pull back. Regroup. Ha! This was their stand, their only chance! What the hell went wrong?
            They reached the line of horsemen. Kelly and his brothers joined them. Aaron stayed in front hearing the revving, roaring engines growing louder. He glanced at the people. A line of flesh blocking Helm’s path. Kids, old people, just good people wanting to live in peace on their home farm that their ancestors homesteaded. He jerked back toward Helm. The hunched man was waving wildly, beating on the pickup’s roof. The machines began moving, coming at them! “Uncle Kester!” he shouted, “Get back to those people! Get’em out‘a there!”
            Kester Hodges kicked his horse, looking strange as he rode furiously away, with the wooden leg kicking. “All right, men!” he shouted again, “We’re going to hold our ground! We’ve got to give those people a chance to get out of the way!” To Taylor, softer, “Taylor, I can’t believe Helm’s men will do this.”
            “Helm’s vicious, Aaron.” Taylor appeared completely sober, “He’s beaten the crap out of his own men for less reason than this.”
            Than this, right. Bulldozers closing. Aaron decided a bluff was about all they had, “Take a bead, boys!”
            Up and down the line the horses were rearing and whinnying. They had not been trained for battle. But for an instant the line quieted. Incredulously, the riders stared at Aaron.
            “First volley goes over their heads!” Aaron shouted, barely able to believe the words even as he was saying them, “Second volley goes at the passenger side of the truck cabs!” Something would happen to stop this. But what could happen?
            Taylor Magellan raised his rifle, aimed it, and squinted down the barrel. Taylor’s going to do it. Then others began cocking rifles and shotguns, raising them, aiming them, unbelievably the horses staying somewhat calm.
            He jerked back toward the contractor. Maybe seventy diesel-powered machines coming, closing as one massive steel blade and bumper, toward scores of hard-to-maneuver farm rigs, wooden hayracks, hitched horses, people!
            Pickups and trucks were getting out of the way but nothing else. Almost nothing else had moved, except to get tangled up in the next rig. Josephine’s white team was too close to the far trees. Senator Bolander’s team was crashing against her hayrack, floundering. The other Bolander teams were jerking, trying to run, people running, screaming, dogs barking, Kester Hodges riding up and down the line waving his arms like a madman, but nothing getting out of the way!
            “We can’t do this, Aaron.”
            Aaron jerked to Kelly, who lowered his rifle and uncocked it, “We’re supposed to be civilized men here.”
            Aaron pointed to the approaching machines, “They’re the ones who are uncivilized, Kelly. What the hell else can we do?”
            “We can back down!”
            “They’re not going to stop! We should go out fighting!” He couldn’t believe what he had just said.
            “Not this time, Aaron.” Kelly then took matters into his own hands again, slapped his horse and rode down the line, “Lower your guns, boys! Back off! We’ll be within the law only if we don’t fire! Move back!”
            The men lowered their guns, all but Taylor Magellan. Swaying back and forth on his stepping horse, remaining solid, he was keeping a bead on something, probably a vision of the baronish agribusinessman who had taken his father’s  farm, probably helping to cause his father’s demise.
            Accelerating engines! The bulldozers weren’t stopping!
            He jerked toward them. Smoke was pouring from exhausts. Operators were grinning insanely. Fifty feet. Forty feet. Riders trying to turn their horses, crashing into each other. Taylor Magellan still steady, still aiming, trigger finger tightening, forearm muscles bulging.
            Taylor, no!”
            Horses were falling. Riders were jumping. Bulldozers crashing the line, at least trying to miss the fallen men but not missing everything. Aaron jumped off and pulled his mount between two bulldozers. In seconds the heavy equipment roared through the advance line, onward, toward the chaotic second line of helpless farm machinery, wooden hayracks, more frantically pawing and struggling horses, and people!
            The meadow appeared as a battlefield. Men and horses down. Several horses kicking at wounds, flailing the ground. Taylor Magellan, still mounted, emptying his rifle in the air.
            In unbelieving shock Aaron watched the people running. Most who had ridden would be all right, at least they could get off and run. The tractor and horse-drivers were not so lucky. One old man in a wheelchair high up on a hayrack, was oscillating one arm, hanging on with the other, watching the scene, flourishing it as if an exciting movie-sequence, and didn’t even appear frightened! What the hell went wrong?
            Supposed to have been a bluff. Luther Helm was supposed to have waited patiently for the injunction, then should have happily filed a huge loss on his taxes. Not this. Only one person can stop this mayhem. Helm. Time for Aaron to cause some violence himself.
****
Aaron scrambled onto his big beautiful bay mount, slapped its rump, kicked, and galloped toward the silver-blue-white pickup parked in the rear. The two hunched men were watching the madness, gloating. Helm began pounding wildly on the cab’s roof. Spicer produced a pump shotgun and handed it up to Helm, who jerked it to his shoulder and aimed.
            He glanced back, saw the bulldozers and trucks crashing the line, hayracks and tractors going over, more horses going down, cranes swinging their huge clawed arms, smashing. He couldn’t see the old man in the wheelchair. He turned back toward Helm and the shotgun, and urged his horse on—fifty feet—he saw the hole in the gun’s barrel. Twelve gauge at least—forty feet—he leaned down and patted the straining neck, and whispered, “Go, boy, but I’m afraid you’re going to die.“ Twenty-five feet, ten….
            Helm fired.
            The white-faced bay shrieked and crashed into the silver-blue-white pickup. Aaron let go and sailed through the air. Helm was frantically trying to pump a second round. Aaron crashed into him and both fell into the younger Helm-looking man. All three went over the side. Aaron leaped to his feet, wrested the shotgun away and flung it. The younger man caused blurry movement to his  right. Aaron suddenly had the strength of ten men and struck out.
            The blow caught Anson Helm in the forehead. The young duplicate of Luther Helm reeled back and fell against the silver-blue-white pickup, then settled to the ground unconscious, a blue-black bump already rising on his forehead. He turned back to the elder Helm, grabbed him by the shirt and throat. Tobacco juice and spittle ran from the cruel mouth onto Aaron’s hands. The ruthless expression had finally changed to fear, bug-eyed fear.
            “All right, you son-of-a-bitch!” he yelled, surprised at the violent sound of his own voice, “Call your dogs off!”
            Helm’s lips were moving, eyes bulging, more brown juice gurgling. Aaron realized he was strangling the man, so released him and yelled again, “Call’em off!”
            Helm choked and gasped, “Look!” His chin was one mass of brown, “It’s over!”
            He dropped the man, turned and stared.
            Over all right. The valley’s defenders were overrun. Every tractor that hadn’t escaped, even his Uncle Kester’s eight-wheeled one, every hayrack, miraculously, all but the one with the old man in the wheelchair, but he looked strange, head laying over. But at least it was over.
            But Helm’s machines were turning around, coming back, accelerating, a dozen or more bulldozers, blades down pushing mountains of dirt toward the tents, and Elizabeth Bolander with the smallest children!
            “You should have thought of this, hippie.”
            Aaron whirled, again faced the shotgun only five feet away.
            “I ain’t callin’ off nobody!” Helm snarled, “I’m gonna blow your goddamn hippie head off and nobody’ll even care!”
            Aaron heard himself bawl an undecipherable cursing sound as he slashed out with both hands and grabbed the barrel of the shotgun just as Helm fired. The heavy load blew away his cavalry hat. An unreal instant later he again gripped Helm’s throat and still had a grip on the shotgun. He jerked the shotgun away and threw the hunched man into the silver-blue-white pickup, “Crawl in the back!” he yelled, “You are going to stop this insanity!”
            Helm started crawling in.
            Aaron lifted his foot and kicked the man over the side, then climbed in himself. On the other side he saw but barely comprehended the white-faced horse lying still, its muzzle gone, a huge splotch of blood on the ground. He slammed the shotgun’s stock down on the cab’s roof, “Get over to those tents, Spicer!”
            Spicer just sat there. Aaron fired through the back window, pumped another round and aimed at Helm’s face.
            “Do it, Spicer!” Helm shrieked,
            The short distance seemed like eternity. Many more bulldozers had joined in the game of terror, pushing huge piles of dirt toward the tents. But Elizabeth Bolander stood solid, hanging onto a cluster of small children. Clumps of dirt were rolling ahead of the piles, getting closer to her feet. “Pull In where they can see you good, Spicer!” Aaron yelled.
            The silver-blue-white pickup lurched and bounced between two bulldozers and jammed to a stop a short distance from Mrs. Bolander. “Now call those dogs off, Helm!” Aaron snarled, shoving the weapon against Helm’s groin, “Or I’ll drill your scrawny body, starting with your testicles!”
            The hunched man raised his arms. The bulldozers stopped. The cranes stopped. The trucks stopped. All engines stopped.
            Almost painful silence ensued.
            Then came a horse’s hideous whinny. A child crying became apparent.
            Sirens in the distance, many of them.
            He looked toward the road. His gaze swept the battlefield. Many horses were down, the one whinnying was lying on its side, kicking and snapping at its torn belly.
He turned back to Helm, who stared coldly, “We’ll meet again, hippie.”
            Aaron tightened his jaws, raised the shotgun, glared down the barrel at the hunched man and watched the eyes turn fearful again, “Count on it, Helm.”
            A few seconds later, about a dozen state patrol cars turned onto the bloody meadow, followed by a bright orange pickup.
**** end of scene
Reviews

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Wow, what a read. By far the best I've downloaded on this site. Excellent plot and superb development of characters. A "can't put it down" book.

TWO
5.0 out of 5 stars Really enjoyable story!, September 11, 2011

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This review is from: The Bellwether (Kindle Edition)

This was a long book but not a slow read. Mr. Nelson has written a very enjoy story that he described in great detail in his synopsis. So many interesting people and events taking place that the story moves so quickly.

If you are a fan of romance, adventure and apocalypse you will not be disappointed in this book. After I finished the last page, I was left wanting more so I hope the author will continue the story with a sequel.

This was a true bargain and I think will remain as one of my favorite books.

THREE

5.0 out of 5 stars Great Work Of Fiction Worth Reading!, November 14, 2011


This review is from: The Bellwether: The Mother of all Disasters (Paperback)

Great Work Of Fiction Worth Reading!
The Bellwether: The Mother of all Disasters is an exciting tale written by author James W. Nelson. Nelson's storyline and characterization are superb. The story is intriguing, yet full of reality. The Bellwether is a highly recommended read for fiction lovers.

465 pages and 57 chapters

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