What follows is the introduction and four excerpts from the novel, Winter in July, then a review from Kurt Stallings, Fort Worth, Texas, the contents list, and contact information.
Introduction
The world is still a
dangerous place. Russia
and China both
have Intercontinental Ballistic Missiles still aimed at the United
States , and likely most other nations of the
free western world. India
and Pakistan
have nuclear weapons, although, presently at least, we think, just aimed at
each other. North Korea
has nuclear weapons, but we don’t know, exactly, what they have. Iran
badly wants nuclear weapons, no matter what their leaders are saying.
And who knows how many other nations have nuclear weapons and/or the capability
of acquiring them very quickly. Oh, yes, and terrorists: How many suitcases can
a terrorist carry? Or a dozen? Or a hundred? A nuclear winter is still somewhat
in the realm of theory; that is, we don’t know what would happen during
and after even a small nuclear exchange. And that’s the key: We don’t know.
This novel, WINTER
IN JULY, is fiction. It is not meant as a call to arms by the doves of the
world, nor as a call to quarters for the hawks. It is meant simply as a good
read, and a reminder to the millions of moderate individuals out there of what
is possible.
All that is necessary
for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing.
Edmund Burke
Irish orator, philosopher, & politician (1729 - 1797)
Excerpt from Chapter 2 Denial
Irish orator, philosopher, & politician (1729 - 1797)
Kirby Yates, 40, has a good
job groundskeeping at the new underground Energy
House Museum
at Hammett’s Mill, North Dakota , population 240. Kirby
suspects it’s a bomb shelter. He’s
nearly obsessed with that suspicion. When his mother cleaned out his late
uncle’s house, then ten-year-old Kirby stumbled onto a collection of nuclear
war literature. He didn’t understand what he had but began reading and had many
nightmares, but he couldn’t stop reading. He couldn’t repress his new found
fascination, which followed him into adulthood. So, yes, the U.S.
government is building secret bomb shelters by small towns, the idea being to
save entire populations.
After his suspicions are confirmed
ex-army Kirby gets a second job (defense of the bomb shelter). But he’s unsure of his feelings (hawk or
dove?) so he attends a peace meeting, where he meets Lisa, one of the
group’s leaders. She leads a protest at a missile silo, involves Kirby, becomes
his lover, and becomes curator of the new underground museum/bomb shelter, but
isn’t told of its insidious true purpose. Conflict of interest would cost her
new job.
By nearly closing Kirby had stomached all the rum he could
and then some, yet remained sober. His
sixth drink was half full. He took a sip
and ordered another. And still he wanted
someone to admit the truth of the construction site. “Say, Elmer, you work out on the edge’a town,
too.” For a second the rum hit kind of
hard. He felt dizzy
Vanders faced him, “Yeah, so?”
The
dizziness passed. It always did, “What’re
they buildin’ out there?”
Vanders
took a deep breath, smoothed his handlebar moustache, then faced away, “It’s
called an energy house, Kirby. Sort’a
like a museum. A demo site. You know that.”
“I know
that’s what we’re told, yeah.”
Vanders
kept facing away, hunched his shoulders, “Why question it? It’s a job.
Something we both need.”
“But don’t
you ever wonder?”
“Nope.” Vanders appeared to have sobered, slightly, “Never.”
“Nobody’ll
talk about what’s goin’ on out there, Elmer.
Why is that?”
“Cause
nuthin’s goin’ on.” Vanders faced him,
appeared to have sobered even more, “I get paid workin’ there, Kirby, and that’s
all I care. If somethin’ else’s goin’ on,
fine. But I don’t need to know about it. And I really don’t care.”
“I know
what’s bein’ built, Elmer.”
“You don’t
know shit.”
Kirby had
not actually spoken the words before. Sometimes
he had trouble even thinking them, and said, not quite whispering, “It’s a bomb
shelter.”
The
jukebox music stopped. By chance the
song had finished, but abruptly. So did
the television. Kirby jerked toward it. Evidently a short pause. The silence throughout the place roared
through his ears.
He stared
at Vanders, who—eyes bulging—stared back and then looked away. Kirby glanced around the room. Colleen sat absorbed on her TV viewing perch.
Kirby
licked at his sharp wisdom tooth nubs furiously. His armpits ran again. Then a new song began on the jukebox. The television came back on. Conversations from several directions drifted
in. Things returned to normal, with
nobody but him knowing they had been kind of abnormal for maybe three seconds. A point in time when everything had simply
stopped.
He took a
breath, then faced the front of the bar, like everyone else, and belted the
rest of his drink, “How’s the family, Elmer?”
Vanders
answered without facing him, “Family’s fine.”
The
evening passed back into the norm, and the complacent acceptance of what was
being built outside of town.
2
DENIAL
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Excerpts from Chapter 9 The Protest
Kirby watched for a few seconds then returned his attention
to the woman before him, "We're probably more alike than you think, Ms. Graham."
"I doubt we're anything alike,
Mr. Yates."
"You
remember my name." He smiled.
She did
not return the smile.
"What's
going to happen?" he asked.
"At two o'clock we're singing the national anthem."
"What?" He couldn't help smiling again, then glanced
at his watch, "Well, it's after two."
"The
cameras aren't here yet." She
glanced at the larger pickup, where both young men and young women in uniform
were climbing out, all wearing side arms, all carrying M16s.
"Cameras?" He felt like grinning, but held it.
"Channel
11." She glanced at him. Her face had lost some of its hardness, "We're
making a statement of irony." For
just a second her face might have expressed a feeling of uncertainty, even
vulnerability, but then it hardened again, "We’re peacemakers singing a
macho song to the war makers."
He
couldn't help a grin. He didn't mean it
offensively.
"You
think this is funny?"
"No." He said it quickly, "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to grin." Don’t grin.
His feelings from the auditorium swept back, "I just meant that…yes,
it will be an irony."
A quiet cheer from the small crowd took
their attention. Just turning in from
the highway, a van. On its side CHANNEL 11. The news-van pulled in beside Kirby's pickup. Voices took their attention back to the
larger air force pickup, where about a dozen armed young men and women were
moving in single file along the fence from north to south. The one with the
leashed German Shepherd remained close to the pickups. The dog, its black ears still perked, was
sitting quietly on its haunches, but definitely continuing to watch the
demonstrators.
Leading
the file was the young man with all the stripes. He stopped, faced the demonstrators from
about six feet. He didn't look any older
than twenty-one or twenty-two, but also did not appear nervous. The remaining security people moved on until
evenly spaced, then stopped and faced outward, their rifles held in front of
them.
The holes
in their line were large enough to throw a hundred dead cats through. Kirby got the feeling, almost, that the air
force was saying 'I dare you.'
He
switched his attention to the news-van. A
woman with a luscious mane of blonde curls had gotten out from the driver's
side, a man bearing a shoulder video camera from the other. Both appeared to be around thirty, a sober
expression on the woman, a malicious-like grin on the man. No doubt he was there to film things getting
out of control.
Second excerpt from Chapter 9 The Protest
The
cameraman was way, way beyond the white line.
But maybe the military was assuming the media to be on their side, at
least unbiased.
Another
moment passed.
The
song reached its final line, "…and the home…of the…brave…."
For
some dumb reason Kirby expected a rousing cheer.
Instead,
silence.
The
cameraman stood for another second or two, then hoisted the camera from his
shoulder, and walked toward his partner by the van. But there had to be some
sort
of climax.
Mainly,
Kirby sensed Ms. Graham leaving his side, then saw Seth hurrying in the same
direction, then more movement to his right—he jerked that way—and 'squawking'. The canvas bags were opened. Two huge white roosters were removed. The cameraman was back. Definitely a malicious grin on his face.
Then
there were the two men with axes, and two swings of those axes, and the two
roosters lost their heads. Seth grabbed
one of the roosters by the feet and ran toward the chain-link fence, and, Ms.
Graham—Lisa—the other.
Kirby
focused on Lisa. He could not believe
his eyes. The flapping rooster was big
and spewing much blood. Yet she carried
the vibrating, sputtering, bleeding double-handful, across the white line,
through the sparse military line, swung the fluttering double-handful back
twice, then heave-hoed it over the fence, where the dead rooster, along with
Seth's, flopped and bled over an area of about twenty feet square each.
Silence
again, but not for long.
Two
military police each—after handing their weapons to adjacent police— approached
both Seth and Lisa. Again Kirby focused
on Lisa as the two airmen, roughly, jerked her hands behind her back. She struggled, and immediately was thrown to
the ground. Kirby moved. He didn't think about it at all, just crossed
the vague white line, and then looked down the barrel of an M16.
The
person holding the weapon was a woman, blonde hair pinned tight to her head
under a dark blue beret, "Please step back behind the line, sir."
He
looked into her steady eyes. She was
following orders. There would be no
reasoning with her, "Please step back, sir, or we'll have to arrest you
too."
Excerpt from Chapter 23 Hell
In a full run, Kirby flew past the corner of the building
and leveled his gun at whatever was there.
A man, trying to get his trousers down.
A woman beneath him, fighting him, her eyes open but not seeing. Lisa.
Sergeant Frank Jansen was trying to rape
her.
Kirby checked his weapon, returned it to
single-fire, then moved close, placed the barrel against Jansen's temple, said
quietly, "You son-of-a-bitch, get away from her."
Jansen faced him. His mouth fell open. He pulled away, began trying to hitch up his
trousers, "I warned you, Yates. I
swear I'll lock you up. You're
threatening an officer of the law with a firearm."
"You fool."
"What?"
"You dumb ass, Jansen. There's no law left."
"What…?"
The man didn't know. He didn't comprehend what had happened. But forget him. Keep your eye on him but forget him. He touched Lisa, "Get up, my darling,
we're leaving."
"Kirby?"
"Yes, I'm here. We're leaving." He kept his gun pointed in the general
direction of Jansen and put his arm around her waist, helped her get to her
feet, then spent a few seconds holding her, "Come on, we're leaving."
"You're just going to leave me here,
Yates?" Jansen spoke matter-of-factly,
standing there like a giant adolescent with his arms hanging at his sides.
Kirby glanced at him but didn't answer. No answer even came to him for such a
question. Then he felt a tug on his arm
by a small, very, small, hand, "Mister?"
He jerked around.
A child, a girl, about five years old. She could see.
Keeping Jansen in his view, he knelt
beside the child, "Honey, who are you?"
"I'm Sharla."
"Sharla
what? What's your last name?"
She said a name but Kirby didn't
recognize it, "Is your mom here, Sharla, or your dad?"
"No.
I don't know where they are."
"You don't know? How did you get here?"
"With my friend. I can't find her, either."
Oh, God.
Well, he wouldn't leave her. He
didn't know what he could do, but he wouldn't leave her. Maybe he could find her parents later, "Lisa,
can you hang onto Sharla's hand?"
"Yes." But Lisa did more. She knelt and held out her arms. Sharla moved into them and Lisa gathered the
tiny girl up and stood, then grasped Kirby's arm, "We're ready."
They were ready. Out of hundreds, he was choosing to help only
two. He faced the quiet mass of people. Every blind eye was on them. Some who had been sitting were getting to
their feet. He felt hopelessly sorry. His stomach, he didn’t know how his stomach
felt, just hollow, completely empty. But
he could not help them. He faced the
sergeant, "So how come you can see, Jansen?"
"I don't know. I…I guess I was facing away."
"Are there others who can see?"
"Yes."
"Where are they?"
"They left. I don't know where they went."
Kirby stared at the man. Right then Jansen appeared pretty harmless. For just a second or two Kirby considered
allowing the ex-officer-of-the-law to join them, and he didn't even know yet
where he was going himself, "Why didn't you go with them?"
"I…." Jansen's eyes fell on Lisa, just for one
split instant.
But long enough to remind Kirby why he wouldn't invite the
sergeant to join them, "Don't try to follow us, Jansen." He pulled Lisa closer, and felt the tiny
Sharla between them, "If I see you again I will not hesitate to use this." He gestured with the M16.
A Review from Kurt Stallings, Amazon Kindle reader
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This review is from: Winter in July (Kindle
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Kirby Yates lives in a part of the country
where there are almost as many nuclear missiles as there are people. The small
little town he calls home is filled with lonely people making their way through
silent lives. They would be mere numbers waiting to be dumped onto a casualty
list if it wasn't for the fact that their exact location is just beyond the
range of total destruction by any enemy missiles aimed at the American bases a
short drive across the prairie. Even so, Yates would be nothing among them in
the eyes of planners, but for the fact that he happens to have a combination of
basic military experience, a quiet competence for planting and managing landscapes,
and a bit more intelligence than most -- common enough throughout the world,
but rare in that particular spot. He's chosen to prepare for and participate in
any nuclear exchange without being informed of the fact until it's too late to
quit, although he is bright enough to realize it before. Ironically, he
realizes, he is preparing the stage for the tragedy that has given him
nightmares since discovering a secret stash of materials in his grandfather's
house. His artist's vision, which he keeps hidden from others, makes his sense
of what may be coming only more vivid.
The author achieves something rare, if not indeed unique, with a work of fiction that not only broadens the reach of its particular sub-genre but doubles as a commentary on that sub-genre in itself. Certainly, this is the first of the A/PA novels I've read that explores the reason I am compelled to read so many. The protagonist grew up with the same obsessive sense of impending nuclear doom that vested in so many of us at a certain age, thanks to countless drills at school, those ridiculous films in class, and any number of black-and-white movies on TV. While some reviewers here are put off by Kirby Yates' initial, relative immaturity -- brilliantly and incisively detailed for him halfway through by a woman explaining why they can not be together -- readers more accustomed to novels that aren't purely action-driven will enjoy following his maturation, complete at the end of the book.
I'm not knocking action books, or those who enjoy them, I'm simply making the distinction so you can choose whether you personally might enjoy the book or not. I like action books; I also like this one. This is a book about a man, not a war, albeit a man preparing for the most terrifying of wars; and it's a book about a real man, not a caricature.
I recommend BUY as someone who enjoyed the tension as the subtle shifts in his relationships, always driven by an artist's appreciation for the insanity of nuclear war, was also balanced by an appreciation for the need for "adults" (as Yates puts it in his musings) who deal with insanity as something that is never going away. The struggle to achieve some sort of mature balance within himself as between those two impulses are what drive his decisions throughout the book. The ending is so satisfying because he finds that balance under the most surprising of circumstances -- or perhaps the only situation in which he might have stumbled onto it. In any event, it's his decisive action that wins him his "adulthood," and brings the security he's always sought to himself and those for whom he cares.
The author achieves something rare, if not indeed unique, with a work of fiction that not only broadens the reach of its particular sub-genre but doubles as a commentary on that sub-genre in itself. Certainly, this is the first of the A/PA novels I've read that explores the reason I am compelled to read so many. The protagonist grew up with the same obsessive sense of impending nuclear doom that vested in so many of us at a certain age, thanks to countless drills at school, those ridiculous films in class, and any number of black-and-white movies on TV. While some reviewers here are put off by Kirby Yates' initial, relative immaturity -- brilliantly and incisively detailed for him halfway through by a woman explaining why they can not be together -- readers more accustomed to novels that aren't purely action-driven will enjoy following his maturation, complete at the end of the book.
I'm not knocking action books, or those who enjoy them, I'm simply making the distinction so you can choose whether you personally might enjoy the book or not. I like action books; I also like this one. This is a book about a man, not a war, albeit a man preparing for the most terrifying of wars; and it's a book about a real man, not a caricature.
I recommend BUY as someone who enjoyed the tension as the subtle shifts in his relationships, always driven by an artist's appreciation for the insanity of nuclear war, was also balanced by an appreciation for the need for "adults" (as Yates puts it in his musings) who deal with insanity as something that is never going away. The struggle to achieve some sort of mature balance within himself as between those two impulses are what drive his decisions throughout the book. The ending is so satisfying because he finds that balance under the most surprising of circumstances -- or perhaps the only situation in which he might have stumbled onto it. In any event, it's his decisive action that wins him his "adulthood," and brings the security he's always sought to himself and those for whom he cares.
Contents
1
PROVIDENCE
3
NUCLEAR SANITY
4
THE NIGHTMARE BEGINS
5
THE ENERGY HOUSE
6
SAMUEL HATWELL, ESQUIRE
7
80 ACRES OF PARADISE
8
REFLECTING
9
THE PROTEST
10
DELUSIONS
11 THE
APPOINTMENT
INTERLUDE
12 THE
NIGHTMARE CONTINUES
13 BOMB
SHELTER
14 NO
QUARTER FOR CARRION-HUNTERS, OR SURVIVORS
15 HIS
HUMAN NEED
16
ALMOST CRAZY
17 THE
BRAWL
18 LISA
19
COLLEEN
20 OPEN
HOUSE
21
BIRTHDAY BASH
22 FROM
HEAVEN TO HELL
23 HELL
24 HOPE
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What a wonderful review James. Thank you . I am looking forward to getting my copy. I do believe our world had been on pins and needles for a very long times. I pray wisdom out weighs the need to be king of the world.
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Sunnie
Thank you Sunnie. I remember the peace movement in the 80s (see the chapter Nuclear Sanity,) and the movie "The Day After." People were more aware then, but since seemingly have forgotten. I don't blame them.
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